[题目]下面的饼状图显示了某校对学生学业成绩评价的新体制.图表所示的五个方面构成了一个学生的学业成绩.假如你是该校学生.请你以“The New Grading System in Our School 为题用英语写一篇短文.给投稿.[内容要点]简要描述图中信息,谈谈你对这一新举措的看法并说明原因.[写作要求]不要逐条翻译,作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称,词数题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】下面的饼状图显示了某校对学生学业成绩评价的新体制，图表所示的五个方面构成了一个学生的学业成绩。假如你是该校学生，请你以“The New Grading System in Our School”为题用英语写一篇短文，给《二十一世纪英文报》投稿。

【内容要点】

简要描述图中信息；

谈谈你对这一新举措的看法并说明原因。

【写作要求】

不要逐条翻译；

作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

词数150左右。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Yours

Li Jin

【答案】The New Grading System in Our School

In order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system. This chart shows how it works.

Students’ test results, which used to be the only way to evaluate a student in school, make up only 30% of his final score. Instead, how a student performs in class, and how he takes notes and does his homework are also taken into account, each part of which makes up 20%. Besides, teamwork in class is also important. If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.

I’m all for the new grading system, which evaluates us students in all fields. By doing so, we students can fully develop our abilities as well as potential on our way to adulthood and can truly make preparations for our future life.

【解析】本文是图表类作文。提纲类作文是在题干中把作文要讨论的问题或者现象直接用文字表述出来。而图表作文是把问题或者现象用图表反映出来，要求我们把图表看懂，并用文字叙述出来，才能对这个问题或现象展开讨论。饼状图表多数用来表示各种事物在总数百分之一百中所占的各自比例。

【范文亮点】

首先，本文结构合理，语篇连贯，内容完整。本文借助于题目The New Grading System in Our School，可以看出图表呈现的是新的评分系统各项评分标准的权重。

本文的重点段落客观地解释了图表传递的信息，通过数据之间的对比分析Students’ test results…make up only 30% of his final score. … ，… how a student performs in class, and how he takes notes and does his homework are also taken into account, each part of which makes up 20%，得出结论：If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates。

最后一段表明自己的看法I’m all for the new grading system，并说明原因By doing so, we students can fully develop our abilities…and can truly make preparations for our future life。

其次，本文语言运用熟练，用词准确，尤其是定语从句、主语从句、条件状语从句等复合句的穿插使用，使得文章长短错落有层次，增强了可读性。

练习册系列答案

增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ben,

As graduation is draw near, I’d like to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kind.

In the last three years, you had shared my joys and sorrows, making my school life unforgettable. I remember very much that you sent me to hospital when I had my left leg break. During the days when I had to stay in the bed, you comforted me and helped me my lessons. It is your friendship which fills my life with sunshine. I hope my friendship will last forever and I also hope all your dreams will come truly in the future.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【题目】写作一（满分15分）

请结合材料，按要求用英文写作，词数不少于60。

USA data shows that nowadays boys tend to perform worse than girls in all aspects in school, which is known as the “boy crisis”. Experts suggest that same-sex schooling may be a possible solution to the problem.

要求：(1)就此材料发表你的感想； (2)应紧扣材料、有明确的观点； (3)在答题卡上作答。

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【题目】

【1】This advertisement is mainly about_______.

A. some unmissable films this winter

B. a way of booking film tickets

C. the company of Cineworld

D. a certain Clubcard

【2】Which of the following is true?

A. This advertisement is probably taken from a magazine.

B. For every adult ticket you will have to pay 4.50 in cash.

C. You will receive two emails after you place your order using the basket.

D. Cineworld encourages viewers to be involved in its management for experience.

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有10处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词出加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）花掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

When I went home yesterday evening, I saw a little cat laying in the middle of the road. It seemed very hunger and it was also in greatly danger, because there were many cars, buses, and trucks on the road. I showed my sad to it and asked my mother whether I could bring it home as soon as I arrive home. While she was afraid that the cat was dirty, but she agreed. However, when I got out, the poor little thing was not here. I was told that it had taken by a warm-hearted person. I breathed a sigh of relief. It is known to us all, animals are our good friends and we should care more about it.

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你给妈妈庆祝生日的全过程。

注意：1．词数不少于60。 2．短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示：oven烤箱, the directions说明书（）

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I like traveling. When a holiday approach, I will careful make a plan for it. My friends like traveling either, so we always go out together. Traveling means a lot to you. First of all, every city has its own feature and lifestyle, that offers us a chance to experience diversity. By exploring these place, we can learn a lot beyond the textbook. Besides, after live in the same place and doing the same things all the way, traveling can make us refreshing. Returning back from a journey, we can be full energy again.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One day, I was cooking in the kitchen while the telephone rang. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on phone, the fire alarm sounds. I ran back to the kitchen only to find the room full of smoke and the beef bad burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, the two fire engines were outside my house. I was quite worrying. I told the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.

【题目】The Spotlight(公众注意的中心) in Rio

Phelps puts spotlight on cupping(拔火罐)

Olympic gold medalist Michael Phelps fed American swimmers to 8 gold medals in the 4 × 100-meter relay, but what grabbed media attention and led to stories and photos around the globe were the purple and red circles on his back.

Michael Phelps of the USA is seen with red cupping marks on his shoulder as he competes during the 2016 Rio Olympics men’s 200m butterfly in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil, Aug 8, 2016.

Chinese swimmer Fu Yuanhui goes viral

China’s women’s swimmer Fu Yuanhui has created a hit online not just by winning the bronze medal in the 100m backstroke competition, but also by her facial expressions during the post semi-final interview with China Central Television (CCTV) on Monday.

When asked whether she held back for the final, Fu replied “No, I used my ‘prehistorical power (洪荒之力)’” What she meant was that she had spared no efforts in the semi-final. Since then, the so-called “prehistorical power” has gone viral and become a new Internet meme.

Britain wins first Olympic diving gold in men’s synchronized 3m springboard(男子双人3米跳板)

Britain’s Jack Laugher and Chris Mears ended China’s gold medal monopoly (垄断) over diving events at the Rio Olympics by winning the men’s synchronized 3m springboard final on Wednesday, the country’s first-ever Olympic gold medal in diving.

Laugher and Mears finished with a six-round total of 454.32 points, just 4.11 points ahead of silver medalists Mike Hixon and Sam Dorman of the USA at the Maria Lenk Aquatics Center. China’s Cao Yuan and Qin Kai took the bronze with 443.70 points.

【1】What attracted media attention with Phelps’ winning the gold medal?

A. His scars on his back.

B. His great leadership.

C. The cupping marks on his back.

D. His achievements made in the men’s 200m butterfly.

【2】Which of the following is NOT the reason why Fu Yuanhui became the spotlight?

A. Her devotion and determination to swimming.

B. Her achievement in the 100m backstroke competition.

C. Her facial expression during the post semi-final interview.

D. Her humourous reply to the reporter—the so-called “prehistorical power”.

【3】What can we learn from the third news?

A. China didn’t win any medals in diving events at the Rio Olympics.

B. Mike Hixon and Sam Dorman of the USA took silver with 447.81 points.

C. Britain had never won the Olympic diving gold medal before the Rio Olympics.

D. Britain became the gold medal monopolist (垄断者) of diving events at the Rio Olympics.

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