Question

【题目】假设你是学生李华，对于如何安排即将到来的暑假拿不定主意。你既想多花时间在学习上，又希望能出去旅游。请给你在美国的朋友Tom写一封信，征求建议。包括以下内容。

1. 写信目的

2. 目前的倾向及理由

3. 期待对方回复

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom，

How is everything going ?In your last letter ,you have asked me about my summer activities. I don’t know how to deal with my vacation. Not only do I want to spend much time on study but also I hope to travel. So ask for your advice. Here is my plan.

First, to relax myself ,I intend to have a seven-day vacation in Dalian. Second, I have missed my family for so long . I will go to see my grandparents .Third ,I am going to read masterpieces in the whole holiday ,which can develop my interest of literature. In addition ,I will spend fifteen days taking part in English classes ,improving my English competence.

please write back to me soon.

yours, sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假设你是学生李华，对于如何安排即将到来的暑假拿不定主意。你既想多花时间在学习上，又希望能出去旅游。请给你在美国的朋友Tom写一封信，征求建议。包括以下内容。1. 写信目的2. 目前的倾向及理由3. 期待对方回复。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

Not only do I want to spend much time on study but also I hope to travel.句中使用倒装句；First, to relax myself ,I intend to have a seven-day vacation in Dalian.动词不定式做目的状语；I am going to read masterpieces in the whole holiday ,which can develop my interest of literature.非限制性定语从句运用巧妙；,I will spend fifteen days taking part in English classes ,improving my English competence.现在分词做结果状语；另外，First, Second, In addition的运用为文章增色添彩。