Question

【题目】假如你是李华，上周在美国参加了友好学校组织的“中国学生文化交流周”活动，并住在Kelly家里。请你给在美国期间认识的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信，内容包括：

1．交流活动中的收获；

2．难忘在Kelly家的美好时光；

3．感谢她送你的礼物。

注意：1.词数100 左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

提示词汇：文化交流周：Cultural Exchange Week

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Kelly,

I’ve been back home safely from America. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in your country.

Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in the USA. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends.

What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I’ll never forget the days we spent together.

Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offered me as a gift. It’s a great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.

Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】首先审题，这篇文章要求假如你是李华，上周在美国参加了友好学校组织的“中国学生文化交流周”活动，并住在Kelly家里。请你给在美国期间认识的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信。任务中给出的提示信息包含如下内容：1．交流活动中的收获；2．难忘在Kelly家的美好时光；3．感谢她送你的礼物。确定文体是记叙文。其次选用正确的人称和时态，考虑用一般过去时，第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意回忆在Kelly家的美好时光和感谢她送你的礼物，用一般过去时，而表示作者的收获，用一般现在时。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如：participate in参加，make full use充分利用。还使用了定语从句We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history.和定语从句And I’ll never forget the days we spent together.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。