Question

10．由于不少孩子沉迷于网络游戏，互联网被许多家长憎恨．其实互联网本身没错，错的是错误使用网络的人．请你根据以下信息写一篇文章，题为"The Internet can benefit us a lot"，谈谈网络的益处．
注意：1．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
         2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
         3．词数100左右．
*The Internet is the source of abundant information，and diverse people can turn to it．
*People comb through the webs for what is relevant to their needs for reference．
*Some people make appointments with doctors or others on the Internet．
*People can buy what they want on the Internet．
*People communicate with each other on the Internet．
*People have a distant education on the Internet．
*…
The Internet can benefit us a lot       Many parents hate the Internet because their children abandon themselves to the Internet．Actually，the Internet can benefit us a lot．The Internet，which diverse people can turn to，is the source of abundant information．People can comb through the webs for what is relevant to their needs for reference．They can not only make appointments with doctors on the Internet，but also buy what they want through the Internet．It's very convenient for people to communicate with each other on the Internet．What's more，it is likely that people have a distant education on the Internet．
So，it is the children，rather than the Internet that are to blame．We adults should help our children learn to use the Internet appropriately．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于网络的益处的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明论述的主题；二 论述网络的好处；三教育孩子正确利用网络．
高分句型：
1．The Internet，which diverse people can turn to，is the source of abundant information．句子里which引导非限制性定语从句，代指先行词The Internet，做turn to的宾语，表示"各种各样的人可以向网络求助"．
网络是丰富信息的来源，各种各样的人可以向网络求助．
2．So，it is the children，rather than the Internet that are to blame．句子里it is…that 是强调句式，强调主语 the children，rather than the Internet．而rather than 连接主语时用就远原则，即谓语和 the children一致．
是孩子本身而不是网络应该受到责备．

解答 The Internet can benefit us a lot
       Many parents hate the Internet because their children abandon themselves to the Internet．Actually，the Internet can benefit us a lot．（点明论述的主题）
       The Internet，which diverse people can turn to，is the source of abundant information．【高分句型一】People can comb through the webs for what is relevant to their needs for reference．They can not only make appointments with doctors on the Internet，but also buy what they want through the Internet．It's very convenient for people to communicate with each other on the Internet．What's more，it is likely that people have a distant education on the Internet．（论述网络的好处）
       So，it is the children，rather than the Internet that are to blame．【高分句型二】We adults should help our children learn to use the Internet appropriately．（教育孩子正确利用网络）

点评 考查读写任务类作文．
所以类型的写作都有以下几步：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．