题目内容
4.现在许多学校对学生采取封闭管理,同学们对此看法不一.假如你是李华,你的外教要求你就此话题用英文写一篇短文.请根据下表所提供的信息完成短文,字数100左右.有的同学认为 | 有的同学认为 | 你的看法 |
1.学校限制我们的自由; 2.学生和社会接触少; 3.学生的兴趣和爱好不能得到充分的发展. 因此… | 1.学校是学习知识的地方; 2.学生应该安心在学校里学习; 3.一些学生缺乏自控能力,离开了老师,可能会… | … |
Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long.
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分析 本文为议论文.
写作主题为:学校的封闭管理
写作要点为:1,赞同观点;2,反对观点;3,自己的看法.
解答 Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students at school all day long.Students have different opinions about it.
Some think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society.They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies.Therefore,they have less interest in their studies.
Others think school is the best place to study so they should put their heart into their lessons.Owing to lacking the ability to control themselves,once out of school,some students may lose control of themselves and do something influencing their studies.
Personally,it is necessary to keep students at school.But at the same time schools should organize various activities where students can enjoy themselves.
(108 words)
点评 考生需根据所给的表格信息提炼文章的写作主题,需了解写作要点及写作意图,仔细构思写作结构,平时注意积累词汇及语法知识.

简介 | 1918年出生在南非;1943年加入ANC,领导黑人进行争取平等和自由的反种族歧视斗争;曾蹲监狱27年;1993年获诺贝尔和平奖;1994年被选为第一位黑人总统;2013年因癌症去世. |
个人评价 | … |
1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯;
3.词数:120左右.
参考词汇:anti-racial discrimination 反种族歧视
Nelson Mandela
Mandela will be well remembered as a freedom fighter for the black people.
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A. | which;that | B. | that;which | C. | that;that | D. | which;which |
有形的钥匙 | ![]() | 无形的钥匙 |
生活中必不可少,拥有它方便、快捷,丢失了会增加烦恼. | 学习、成长中同样重要, 比如… (至少三点) | |
In a word,…(至少两点) |
2.词数150左右.开头已经写好,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名.
We all have some keys in life,some visible and others invisible. .
A. | distinguishing | B. | distinguished | ||
C. | to distinguish | D. | to be distinguished |
倾诉对象 | 同学和朋友 | 老师和家长 | 没有 |
百分比 | 61% | 22% | 17% |
理由 | 同龄人容易交流和理解 | 老师家长阅历丰富,有生活和教育经验 | 不愿和别人说自己的事或难以与别人相处 |
2.词数为100左右.
Dear Editor
Recently the Student Union carried out a survey,the title of which is"To whom do you go to when in trouble?"The results are as follows.
Yours sincerely.