Question

18．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Ryan King将到你校来交流学习，为期半年．请你用英语写封信，向他大致介绍一下你校的基本情况．字数在120 左右．
内容至少应包括以下几点
①校所处的地理位置；
②校出行的交通；
③校基本设施、师资力量；
④学生的课外活动及教育教学亮点．
Dear Peter，
No words can express my excitement on hearing that you are coming to our school．I hope the following information my help you learn something about it．
Our school is as old as the city．Located in the city centre，it has a very convenient transportation system．There are quite a few buses，trains，subways that you can take when you want to leave or leave for our school．As a key middle school，it is equipped with well-qualified facilities，such as two library buildings，in which you can read various books，magazines，newspapers，etc； one laboratory building for teachers and students to do experiments．（高分句型二）There is also one lecture hall where the students can enjoy lectures of different topics．
What's more，you can build your body and your sports interest in some places，like a swimming pool，one gymna sium and one fitness centre，where various out-class activities can be experienced．（高分句型三）Most important of all，we have teachers who come from teachers'training universities or institutions．They love their work and students，always sparing no effort to guide the students and satisfy their needs．And through different students associations，the students will get the opportunities to put what they have learned into practice，find fun in learning as well．（高分句型四）
In brief，no choice is better than choosing our school．I am waiting for your coming．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你的美国朋友Ryan King将到你校来交流学习，为期半年．请你用英语写封信，向他大致介绍一下你校的基本情况，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：①校所处的地理位置；②校出行的交通；③校基本设施、师资力量；④学生的课外活动及教育教学亮点．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Located in坐落于；is equipped with配备有；What's more而且；Most important of all最重要的是；spare no effort to 不遗余力的去做；In brief简而言之；
As a key middle school，it is equipped with well-qualified facilities，such as two library buildings，in which you can read various books，magazines，newspapers，etc； one laboratory building for teachers and students to do experiments．（高分句型一）
What's more，you can build your body and your sports interest in some places，like a swimming pool，one gymna sium and one fitness centre，where various out-class activities can be experienced．（高分句型二）
And through different students associations，the students will get the opportunities to put what they have learned into practice，find fun in learning as well．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       No words can express my excitement on hearing that you are coming to our school．I hope the following information my help you learn something about it．
      Our school is as old as the city．Located in the city centre，it has a very convenient transportation system．There are quite a few buses，trains，subways that you can take when you want to leave or leave for our school．As a key middle school，it is equipped with well-qualified facilities，such as two library buildings，in which you can read various books，magazines，newspapers，etc； one laboratory building for teachers and students to do experiments．（高分句型一）There is also one lecture hall where the students can enjoy lectures of different topics．
       What's more，you can build your body and your sports interest in some places，like a swimming pool，one gymna sium and one fitness centre，where various out-class activities can be experienced．（高分句型二）Most important of all，we have teachers who come from teachers'training universities or institutions．They love their work and students，always sparing no effort to guide the students and satisfy their needs．And through different students associations，the students will get the opportunities to put what they have learned into practice，find fun in learning as well．（高分句型三）
        In brief，no choice is better than choosing our school．I am waiting for your coming．
                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．