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1．英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文．假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My favorite sport
Though there are different kinds of sports，but swimming is my favorite．It was a very excited experience to learn swimming with my parents when I am five years old．
Swimming is a real good sport．It makes me feeling relaxed．This sport can make me stay health and strong，so I exercise almost every part of my body every time I go swimming．
    Before going to swim，we should pay attention three points．The first is to make your body in a better state．The second is that do not eat too many．The last is that you'd better swim with some friends．These can help you stay safe and enjoy ourselves．

分析 作者在文中介绍了自己最喜欢的体育运动--游泳，游泳使得作者感到放松并能保持身体健康强壮．作者在文中还给出了游泳时应注意的三点事项．

解答 My favorite sport
Though there are different kinds of sports，but swimming is my favorite．It was a very excited experience to learn swimming with my parents when I am five years old．
Swimming is a real good sport．It makes me feeling relaxed．This sport can make me stay health and strong，so I exercise almost every part of my body every time I go swimming．
Before going to swim，we should pay attention∧three points．The first is to make your body in a better state．The second is that do not eat too many．The last is that you'd better swim with some friends．These can help you stay safe and enjoy ourselves．
详解：
1．去掉but；考查连词，Though/Although引导让步状语从句时可与yet/still连用，但不能与but连用，故去掉but．
2．excited改为exciting；考查分词作形容词，现在分词形式作形容词修饰物，过去分词形式作形容词修饰人，句子的主语是It，故用现在分词形式作形容词．
3．am改为was；考查动词的时态，根据句意"当我五岁的时候"可知此处要用一般过去时．
4．real改为really；考查副词，此处用副词作状语，修饰形容词good．
5．feeling改为feel；考查动词的用法，make是使役动词，后面跟省to不定式，即动词原形，故此处用feel．
6．health改为healthy；考查并列成分，这里healthy与后面的strong是并列成分，并列作动词stay的表语，故形式要保持一致．
7．so改为because；考查状语从句，分析句意为"游泳使我健康强壮，因为游泳时身体的每个部位都能得到锻炼"，故用because引导一个原因状语从句．
8．attention后面加to；考查固定短语，pay attention to是固定搭配，意为"注意…"，后面跟名词．
9．many改为much；考查固定搭配，eat too much是固定搭配，意为"吃得太饱"．
10．ourselves改为yourself；考查反身代词；结合上下文分析此处的反身代词应与you保持一致．

点评 短文改错题首先要通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确．

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