Question

3．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions．
近期，你校网站发起一项活动，投票选举一项你校学生共同参与的主题活动．给网站编辑写信，谈谈你的看法．信中必须包括：
1．你希望参与的活动．
2．你推荐该活动的理由．
3．你对此项活动的建议．
（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等任何真实信息）
Dear editor，
I would like to recommend that we hold an English festival which all of us students can take part in．（希望参与的活动）
As far as I am concerned，English festival will contribute us a lot．Firstly，holding English festival can enrich students'life．They can learn different customs and cultures of English-speaking countries．It will be more interesting and lively than we learn in class．Secondly，I think English festival will be a good platform for students to display their talents in English and thus give those students more interest and confidence in learning English．（推荐该活动的理由）
I suggest that the English festival should include various activities．For example，we can have an English party in which students can give English songs，speeches and so on．We can also have an English debate辩论 about some interesting topics．All in all，I hope that the English Festival can help us students learn more about English culture and can make our after-class life more colorful and meaningful．（对此项活动的建议）
Yours sincerely，．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇关于全校学生可共同参与的主题活动，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般将来时，内容要点包括：你希望参与的活动，推荐该活动的理由，对此项活动的建议．首先总体介绍参与的活动，然后介绍推荐该活动的理由，最后建议．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为参与的活动，第二部分为推荐该活动的理由，第三部分为对此项活动的建议
重点短语与句型：
As far as I am concerned就我而言
All in all总的来说
make our after-class life more colorful and meaningful．使得我们的课后生活更加多彩，有意义
take part in 参加
I would like to recommend that we （should ） hold an English festival  which all of us students can take part in此句注意recommend虚拟语气shoule 可省略，及定语从句
holding English festival can enrich students'life动名词做主语，谓语动词单数

解答 Dear editor，
 I would like to recommend that we hold an English festival which all of us students can take part in．（希望参与的活动）
 As far as I am concerned，English festival will contribute us a lot．Firstly，holding English festival can enrich students'life．They can learn different customs and cultures of English-speaking countries．It will be more interesting and lively than we learn in class．Secondly，I think English festival will be a good platform for students to display their talents in English and thus give those students more interest and confidence in learning English．（推荐该活动的理由）
 I suggest that the English festival should include various activities．For example，we can have an English party in which students can give English songs，speeches and so on．We can also have an English debate辩论 about some interesting topics．All in all，I hope that the English Festival can help us students learn more about English culture and can make our after-class life more colorful and meaningful．（对此项活动的建议）
Yours sincerely，

点评 第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．