假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:把缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
　　 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Recently I read an article in a magazine．It was about the mother who was worried about her son just because of he always kept his hair long．The mother thought that was not right，and the son felt there was nothing unusually about it．Different generations have different opinion on the same thing．That is what is meaning by"the generation gap"．We can see them in our daily life．Most of our parents like listening to old songs when young people prefer pop songs．Every time my father finds me listening to rock music，he always shouted，"Shut it off．It's awful!"How can we deal with the generation gap？

分析本文讲述作者最近读过的一篇杂志上的文章，是关于母亲担心她的儿子，因为他总是让他的头发长了．妈妈认为这是不正确的，而儿子觉得没有什么不寻常的事．不同的人对同样的事情有不同的看法．这也是"代沟"的涵义．在日常生活中我们可以看到，在我们大多数的父母喜欢听老歌的时候，年轻人更喜欢流行歌曲．每次爸爸发现我听摇滚音乐，他总是大声喊道，"把它关掉．这太可怕了！"我们如何处理代沟？

解答 Recently I∧read an article in a magazine．It was about the mother who was worried about her son just becau
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se of he always kept his hair long．The mother thought that was not right，and the son felt there was nothin
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g unusually about it．Different generations have different opinion on the same thing．
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That is what is meaning by"the generation gap"．We can see them in our daily life．Most of our parents like l
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istening to old songs when young people prefer pop songs．
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Every time my father finds me listening to rock music，he always shouted，"Shut it off．It's awful!"How ca
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n we deal with the generation gap？
解析：
1．I后加have．考查动词的时态．根据可知Recently I read an article in a magazine近来我在杂志上读到一篇文章，所以应该用现在完成时态，表示过去的动作对现在造成的影响．所以谓语用have read．
2．the 改为 a．考查冠词．第一次提到这位母亲，用a表示"一位"．
3．of 去掉．考查介词． because和because of 都表示"因为"，但是because后面跟句子，而because of后面用单词，短语或what从句．本句 because of he always kept his hair long．是句子，所以用 because．
4．and改为but．考查连词．The mother thought that was not right，和the son felt there was nothing unusually about it．之间是转折关系，所以用but．
5．unusually改为unusual．考查形容词和副词．修饰不定代词  nothing用形容词．
6．opinion 改为opinions．考查名词． different"不同的"后面应该用名词复数．
7．meaning改为meant．考查固定句式．what is meant by"the generation gap"=what is the meaning of"the generation gap"．表示代沟的含义是什么．
8．them 改为it．考查代词．句子We can see them in our daily life里them应该代指the generation gap，所以用it．
9．when改为while．考查连词．Most of our parents like listening to old songs 和 young people prefer pop songs之间是对比关系，表示父母喜欢听老歌，然而年轻人喜欢流行音乐．所以用while表示对比．
10．shouted 改为 shouts．考查时态．根据Every time my father finds me listening to rock music可知用的是一般现在时态，因此用shouts．

点评考查短文改错．
1．because 是连词，其后接句子，例如：
He is called Mitch，because his name is Mitchell．
人们叫他米奇，因为他大名叫米切尔．
2．because of 是复合介词，其后接名词、代词、动名词、what 从句等．例如：
We could see him wasting away because of his illness．
我们看得出他因为生病而日渐消瘦