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【题目】假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英文以短文的形式写一封电子邮件,将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。

要点:

时间:下周六上午8:0011:00

内容:采摘苹果

报名:办公室,下周四下午5:00

提示:带帽子、手套 欢迎踊跃参加

注意:1.词数150左右;

2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

参考词汇: 社区 community

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【答案】Dear neighbors,

We are happy to announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we are going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome. We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting. Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we'll be back at about 11 o'clock.

If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.

We suggest that you bring a hat and a pair of gloves with you.

We are looking forward to your joining us.

Community Office

【解析】试题分析:本文是一篇书信类作文。书信类作文在写作时要注意称呼的使用,如:MrMrs等。书写正文的时候一定要注意不要遗漏文中给出的要点。写作时,要点表述一定要层次清晰,语句要通顺流畅。尽可能地避免出现语法错误,做到文中语意清楚,简单明了。可适当增加一些细节,以使表达更加顺畅。写作前还要根据内容判断确定时态和人称。尽可能地得体地使用所学词汇和句型。如能使用一些高级词汇、常用的短语和高级句式,则会给文章增添色彩,提高作文的档次。恰当使用一些连词和插入语,可以使文章表达更加自然、流畅。注意字数要控制在150词左右,注意书写工整,卷面整洁。

【范文亮点点评】

本篇范文的亮点在于语言的使用简洁明了,清楚易懂。文章中有高级句型如We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting使用了定语从句.;If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.使用了状语从句;We suggest that you bring a hat and a pair of gloves with you.使用了虚拟语气,这些句型体现了作者深厚的作文功底

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