Question

【题目】假如你是《当代中学生》的主编Li Hua，你收到了一封读者来信，请根据信件内容，给Confused daughter写封建议信。

Dear Sir,

I have a mum who is just like a camera in the home. She wants to know everything about me and decides everything for me. I know that is her special love to me, yet I still hope she can respect and trust me. Could you please give me some advice?

Best regards,

Confused daughter

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2. 信的开头已为你写出，不计入总词数。

参考词句:

私人空间: private space

代 沟:generation gap

Dear Confused daughter,

I’m deeply concerned about your situation.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Confused daughter,

I’m deeply concerned about your situation. Therefore, I’m writing to offer you following practical suggestions:

First, it’s wise to understand your mum and her love to you, because understanding is the first step to solution. Besides, talk to her face to face and ask her to give you some private space. Just imagine how she hopes to narrow the generation gap. Finally, why not do something to earn her trust? You can get her involved in some of your daily activities. If so, she will be relieved to find her daughter reliable and promising.

Above is my advice, which may help make your life a lot easier. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文为应用文。假如你是《当代中学生》的主编Li Hua，你收到了Confused daughter一封读者来信，在信中反映了这个困惑的女儿与妈妈之间的矛盾，给Confused daughter写封建议信。

本文是书信体作文。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等依次陈述建议。具体为：文章第一段表明写信的原因，即给困惑的女儿一点建议。第二部分主要叙述所给建议的主要内容，如要理解妈妈的苦心，要多交流等。这个女儿认为妈妈对她缺乏信任和尊重，表示委屈。最后一段表达自己的美好祝愿。