Question

【题目】文中共有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

Last Sunday I witnessed a traffic accident on our way home. I was wandering down the sidewalk while there went loud crash. Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away. I went up and found the two drivers bad injured, bleeding and trap in the taxis. Luckily, they were rescued on time because people came to help them and called an ambulance. As was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast. It reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and them.

Answer 1

【答案】1. our way中的our改为my

2.while there went中的while改为when

3.went loud crash中的loud前面加a

4.删掉far away中的far

5.bad injured中的 bad改为badly

6.trap in the taxis中的trap改为trapped

7.on time中的on改为in

8.As was clear中的As改为It

9.the safe of中的safe改为safety

10.others and them中的them改为themselves

【解析】1.句意：在我回家的路上我目睹了一次交通事故。on my way home在我回家的路上，故把our way中的our改为my。

2.句意：我正在路边闲逛，这时候听到了一个大的撞击声。固定句式：正在做某事，这时候……。故把while there went中的while改为when。

3.句意：我正在路边闲逛，这时候听到了一个大的撞击声。a loud crash泛指“一声很响的撞击声”，根据句意可知在went loud crash中的loud前面加a。

4. ten meters away是“距离有10米远”，有具体的距离数，故去掉多余的far。

5.修饰形容词injured 应该用副词，故把.bad injured中的 bad改为badly。

6. two drivers 和trap是被动关系，用过去分词作状语，故把trap in the taxis中的trap改为trapped。

7. on time“准时”，in time及时，句意：幸运的是他们被及时救了。故把on time中的on改为in。

8. As引导的是非限制性定语从句，这句话明显不是： it is clear that...很明显……，it是形式主语，故把As was clear中的As改为It。

9. 句意：这表明他们缺乏对自己和别人安全的关心。前面有定冠词the，故safe改为safety。

10. 句意：这表明他们缺乏对自己和别人安全的关心。用themselves指代the taxi drivers。故把others and them中的them改为themselves。