题目内容
12.假定你是李华,现就读于光明中学高二年级.目前你的学习出现了问题.面对即将到来的重要考试,你很紧张,出现一些焦虑症状(头晕、睡眠不好等).请你用英语向某英文报编辑写一封信,希望得到帮助.注意:1.词数:100字左右.开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.参考词汇:头晕-dizzy(adj.)
Dear editor,
I am Li Hua of Senior Two,Guangming Middle School.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 高级句型;
(高级句型一)With a vital exam drawing near,I am more nervous.
在表达为很紧张原因时,使用了with+名词+doing结构,句意为随着重要考试的来临;
(高级句型二)Feeling dizzy,I can't sleep well.
该句使用非谓语表达,feel和句子主语I之间是主动关系,所以使用feeling;
高级词汇:in trouble 处于麻烦中;turns around发生转变;Worse still更糟糕的是;vital至关重要的;
解答 Dear editor,
I am Li Hua of Senior Two,Guangming Middle School.I'm writing this letter to ask for help because I'm really in trouble these days.
What is troubling me is my studies.I used to be a top student in my class.But nowadays everything turns around.I can't make any progress however hard I try.Worse still,my grades start to drop sharply.(高级句型一)With a vital exam drawing near,I am more nervous.(高级句型二)Feeling dizzy,I can't sleep well.Every time I think about the exam,I will be stuck in anxiety.If this problem can't be solved,I think I am going crazy.Words fail to convey how depressed I am!I am at a total loss as to how to help myself out.
Would you please give me some advice?Your timely help will be highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 本次书面表达是要求写一封信,写作时须注意:仔细阅读所给信息,别遗漏;根据表达需要确定时态、语态;使用一些高级句式,增加文章效果.