Question

假定你是李华，你的朋友李明写信告诉你他因不善交友而苦恼。请根据下面提示给他写回信，提出建议。

提示：1.友善，乐于助人。

2.多与他人交流。

3.多参加活动。

注意：1.词数：100左右

2.可以适当发挥，以使短文连贯。

3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数。

参考词汇：communicate 交流。 activity 活动

Dear Li Ming,

________________________________________________________________________                   Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Ming,

I`m sorry to hear you`re feeling worried for failing to make friends. Some tips below may be helpful to you.

First, be kind, friendly and polite to others and always ready to help others, through which you`ll get well paid. Second, try to communicate with others more, for it helps strengthen your ties with friends and lots of misunderstandings can be avoided. Third, take an active part in activities, such as sports,  games, travels, parties, etc. This way, you`ll get more chances to communicate with others. Besides, it is also very important that friends should be faithful to each other.

Anyhow, there are many ways to develop a good friendship. Hope you will get along well with your friends.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于半开放性的作文，只是给出一些大概的要点，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。可以从与他人交往中所遇见的问题着手，提醒要站在对方的立场看问题，少说多听，不要随便发表自己的观点。多与他人交流，不要拘谨。在写作的时候要合理运用语法规则，灵活运用连接词如first, second, third等等。也要使用一些相对高级的句型，让文章更有文采。

考点：考查半开放性作文

点评：半开放性作文的考查对考生有一定的难度，因为要考生仔细筛选要点，在组织成文。在写作的时候要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型让文章更有文采。