Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在该词下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One day in the restaurant where I worked, I am serving a table of four and each person had ordered the different kind of fish. Three plate were already on the table when the man closest to me pointing to one plate and asked me the name of the fish on it. Before I could answer him, he continued ask me the name of the fish on another one plate. I was about to answer him while I noticed that the last plate on my tray (托盘) began to fall. They fell noisily to the floor seconds late, spreading its contents on the carpet. Everyone stared me and I stood there with a red face.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 am → was ;

 the → a ;

 plate → plates ;

 pointing → pointed ;

 ask →asking/to ask ;

 去掉one;

 while → when ;

 They → It ;

 late → later ;

 stared → stared at ；

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述了作者在做服务员期间的一次经历。一天作者给一个四人桌的顾客端菜，其中一位顾客不断地问这盘上是什么鱼，那盘上是什么鱼，作者正要回答时他托盘上的最后一盘菜却滑了下来，摔到地上，引得众人侧目，弄的作者非常尴尬。

 考查动词时态。I am serving a table of four 根据上文语境One day in the restaurant where I worked,可知应该用一般过去时，所以把am改为was 。

 考查冠词用法。each person had ordered the different kind of fish.由语境可知此处不是特指概念，表示“一种不同的”要用a different kind of +名词，所以把the 改为 a 。

 考查名词复数。Three plate were already on the table，因为plate是可数名词，而且前面又有three修饰，所以把 plate改为plates。

 考查谓语动词。when the man closest to me pointing to one plate 根据结构判断此句中缺少谓语动词，所以把pointing 改为 pointed 。

 考查非谓语动词。he continued ask me the name of the fish，根据动词用法可知continue 后面跟动词不定式或动名词做宾语，所以在ask前加to或把 ask改为asking。

 考查不定代词用法。 the name of the fish on another one plate，another后面直接跟单数名词或者不定代词，此处语义重复，所以去掉one。

 考查连词用法。I was about to answer him while I noticed that ……根据语法可知be about to do 只和when从句搭配，所以把while 改为 when 。

 考查代词用法。They fell noisily to the floor 从上文可知此处指的是鱼从盘子里掉下来，根据语境可知鱼是一条，所以把They改为 It 。

 考查副词用法。They fell noisily to the floor seconds late, 表示“多长时间后”需用“时间段+later” 表示，所以把late改为 later。

 考查固定短语，Everyone stared me。  stare是不及物动词，盯着看要用stare at ，所以在stared 后加介词at 。

考点：考查短文改错。