题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你的朋友小敏最近迷恋网购,花光了自己的压岁钱,写信向你借钱。请你给她回信,主要内容如下:1.同意借钱,但必须要在下月底之前归还;2.分析网上购物的利与弊;3. 劝她学会勤俭生活,不乱花钱。
要求:1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。2.适当增加细节使行文连贯。
提示:压岁钱:gift money,网上购物:online shopping,勤俭: thrifty adj.
Dear Xiaomin,
I have received your letter and I’m sorry that you’re in trouble.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Xiaomin,
I have received your letter and I’m sorry that you’re in trouble. Yes of course I’ll lend you the money, as long as it is returned by the end of next month.
Online shopping is really popular these days, which I’m totally aware of, with its wide variety of goods, competitive prices and all the convenience. I myself buy things from Taobao or JD from time to time. What surprised me most, however, was that you should have used all your gift money shopping online. You’ve really got to think twice before you click the mouse. Do you really need the thing, or just want it? Otherwise, you’re just wasting your money and time.
We’ve been told to be thrifty since we were young and I’m sure you know how important that is.
Do take better care of yourself.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲类短文,要求写一封信给向自己借钱的朋友,说明三个要点:1.同意借钱,但必须要在下月底之前归还;2.分析网上购物的利与弊;3. 劝他学会勤俭生活,不乱花钱。提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲,列出要点。确定文章的中心思想,然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象,进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法,增添了写作的灵活性,同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。
【亮点说明】文章充分发挥了自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当:in trouble,as long as只要,wide variety of 各种各样, convenience,think twice三思,thrifty节约,并且使用了一些高级句式:which I’m totally aware of是定语从句, was that you should have used all your gift money shopping online表语从句,此句中的should表示惊讶之意,使用的恰到好处。