题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据下面四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述你参加志愿活动的过程。
注意:词数不少于 60。
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【答案】Last week, I, together with some of my classmates, participated in an activity with the theme of planting vegetables.
Upon hearing the news, some of us immediately decided to sign up. Then all of the participants were involved in a lecture, during which our teacher taught us some fundamental skills about how to get the vegetables well planted.
Having been fully prepared, we all gathered at our garden plot and attentively sowed the seeds into the field, wishing that they would flourish day by day. During the next few days, we came to see them on schedule, watered them, and exactly wrote down their growth diaries. As we expected, they sprouted and grew up with great energy, and at last, we gained a good harvest. We all smiled delightedly and our monitor took some pictures to memorize this amazing moment.
It turned out to be an unforgettable and fulfilling experience.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是图画作文,要求写一篇周记描述你参加的一项志愿活动。
第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求根据四幅图描述你参加的一项志愿活动:假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据下面四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述你参加志愿活动的过程,时态应为一般过去时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如; participant(参与者),plant vegetables(种菜),fundamental skills(基本技巧),attentively(聚精会神地), sow(播种),sprout (发芽),growth diary (成长日记),flourish(茁壮成长),fulfilling(有意义的),unforgettable(难忘的)及memorize(纪念)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。