题目内容
14.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除、或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每次错误以及修改均限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day,Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming for help.Then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice.At the corner,he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand.Without hesitation,Jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground.A few minutes later,three policeman came and took the robber away.Slight wounded as he was in the left hand,but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.
分析 因为杰克的英勇事迹,他在镇上被称作少年英雄.前几天,杰克像往常一样正骑着自行车回家,这时突然听到一个女人正在喊救命.然后他迅速的向那个声音传来的方向骑去.在拐角处,他看见一个女士正在被一个人用刀胁迫.毫不犹豫,杰克立刻向劫匪猛冲过去,控制住劫匪并将其按倒在地.几分钟后,三个警察过来把劫匪带走.尽管杰克左手轻微受伤,但自此以后他就成了全镇上公认的少年英雄.
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1.在has后加been.考查现在完成时的被动语态.be regarded as…意为"被看做/称作…",由于句子是现在完成时,所以be要用过去分词been的形式,构成了现在完成时的被动语态.
2.把while改为when.考查连词. 由句子结构可知此处需要引导时间状语从句的连词,本句的句子结构为be doing…when…"正在做某事这时突然…",用连词when,while不可用于此结构.
3.把towards改为in.考查介词.in the direction of…在某个方向,用介词in.
4.把stopping改为stopped.考查非谓语动词.动词stop的逻辑主语是a woman,它们之间是动宾关系,所以此处用过去分词形式表被动.
5.把her改为his.考查代词.此处考查形容词性物主代词,因为前面是a man,所以此处用his而不是her.
6.把a改为an.考查冠词.此处表示泛指用不定冠词,因为immediate是元音字母开头,所以用an.
7.把held改为holding.考查动名词.因为放在介词by的后面所以此处用动名词形式.
8.把policeman改为policemen.考查名词单复数.由前面的three 可知此处应该用复数形式.
9.把Slight 改为Slightly.考查副词.由于要修饰后面的动词wounded,所以要用副词形式,slight的副词形式为slightly.
10.去掉but.由于前半句是由as引导的让步状语从句,所以此处的but与之在意义上重复,故应去掉.
点评 本题重点考查了被动语态、连词、介词、代词、非谓语动词、副词等知识点,做题时需要认真读题,在了解篇章意思的基础上,根据所学基础知识找出错误点并依次改正,使行文通顺.

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