题目内容
3.假设你是李华,最近得知你的笔友Robert被哈佛大学(Harvard University)录取,请根据所给提示,给他写一封电子邮件.内容包括:1.向他表示祝贺;
2.请他介绍学习英语的经验;
3.邀请他来中国旅游,参观自然美景和历史遗址.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Robert,
.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息得知你的笔友Robert被哈佛大学(Harvard University)录取,请根据所给提示,给他写一封电子邮件,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:向他表示祝贺;请他介绍学习英语的经验;邀请他来中国旅游,参观自然美景和历史遗址.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:be admitted into被录取;congratulate sb on sth 祝贺某人某事;graduate from从…中毕业;be helpful to 对…有用;Besides另外;
I am happy to know that you have been admitted into Harvard University.(高分句型一)
I would like you to share with me your English learning experience,which I think will be helpful to me.(高分句型二)
Besides,China is well known for its beautiful scenery and historical relics,so I hope you can visit China when it is convenient to you.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Robert,
I am happy to know that you have been admitted into Harvard University.(高分句型一)I sincerely congratulate you on your success.
You know,my ambition is to go to a key university in China after graduating from senior high school.I would like you to share with me your English learning experience,which I think will be helpful to me.(高分句型二)Besides,China is well known for its beautiful scenery and historical relics,so I hope you can visit China when it is convenient to you.(高分句型三)I believe the journey will enable you to learn about Chinese culture.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.