题目内容
3.你们班计划在下周一下午4:00-5:00在本班教室举行一次题为"I Have a Dream"的英语演讲比赛,假定你是班长李华,请给你们外籍教师Lucy写封书面邀请函,请她担任评委,对演讲作简要点评,并对获奖者颁发证书(certificate).注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯.
(3)开头结尾已经给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Lucy,______________________________________
YoursLi Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文,根据提示信息给你们外籍教师Lucy写封书面邀请函,请她担任评委,对演讲作简要点评,并对获奖者颁发证书(certificate),写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:下周一下午4:00-5:00在本班教室举行一次题为"I Have a Dream"的英语演讲比赛和表示感谢 2、要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语要邀请函.内容齐全,语句通顺,结构严谨,使用高级句子.In order to promote students'interest inspeaking English,动词不定式做目的状语;we all agree you are the right person to be invited to be the judge.省略that的宾语从句;The contest is scheduled from 4:00 to 5:00pm,during which time six contestants will compete in turn.被动语态和非限制性定语从句完美结合;另外,As our foreign English teacher,At the end of the contest,的运用为文章增色添彩.
解答 Dear Lucy,
In order to promote students'interest in speaking English,our class plans to hold an English Speech contest entitled"I Have a Dream"in our classroom next Monday afternoon.(高分句型一)As our foreign English teacher,we all agree you are the right person to be invited to be the judge.The contest is scheduled from 4:00 to 5:00pm,during which time six contestants will compete in turn.(高分句型二)At the end of the contest,you will also be invited to make a brief comment on the contestants'performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners.Thank your very much for the favor you'll do to us.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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A. | can you solve | B. | solve you can | ||
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