Question

 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) ，不计分。

Good morning,everyone！

The topic of my speech is "My Chinese Dream”. Which is known to all,the education of rural areas are falling behind other areas. And the children there are longing for knowledges. Therefore,the problem about the lack of teachers is especially seriously. It puzzles me whether parents and friends aren't for my idea of being a rural teacher. I understand theirs thoughts and feelings,and I think the children in rural areas are in great need of me. I'll study hard to go college,thus realize my dream. I won't regret my choice. I'll struggle for with my dream. Come on and join me!

Thank you！

Answer 1

Good morning,everyone！

The topic of my speech is " My Chinese Dream".  Which is known to all,the education of rural aruas are falling behind other is areas.   And the children there are longing for knowledges.

knowledge Therefore,the problem about the tack of teachers is especially seriously. It puzzles me whether parents and friends aren't for serious that my idea of being a rural teacher. I understand theirs thoughts and their feelings,and I think the children in rural areas arc in great need but of me. I'll study hard to go A college,thus realize my dream.

to realizing I won't regret my choice. I'll struggle for ^kli my dream. Coitkj on and join me!Thank you！