Question

前不久，学校刚刚举办过校园十佳歌手大赛，该活动得到了学校领导的支持,并深受同学们的广泛欢迎。许多同学都亲自去聆听了歌手们的演唱，想必心中一定有了自己崇拜的偶像。请以The basic quality of a good singer为题，根据你对音乐及演唱技巧的理解，对此次歌手大赛做一个大体描述与总体评价。

注意：总词数不超过120词。

提示词汇：Top Ten of singing competition  十佳歌手大赛 n.

Support 支持    n./v.

Be popular with 受……欢迎 v

Adore v. 崇拜

idol偶像    n.

technique/ skill 技巧 n.

Live show 现场秀

Emotion 感情n.

Melody n. 旋律

Rhythm n. 节奏

 

Answer 1

【答案】

The basic quality of a good singer

Recently, a competition about the top 10 school singers was held in our school.The competition was supported by the school,and was popular with many students,who went to listen to the singers.There was no doubt that they adored their idols.

In my opinion, there must be some techniques/ skills in singing.First of all,the singers must have the ability to perform in Live show,where they can show their singing skills fully.Secondly,while singing,they should put their emotion in it,and follow the Melody and Rhythm

    In conclusion,the competition is a great success.It is bound to arouse the students’ interest in music and enrich our school life.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，请以The basic quality of a good singer为题，根据你对音乐及演唱技巧的理解，对此次歌手大赛做一个大体描述与总体评价。文章的要点是以关键词的形式给出来的，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的单词串联起来。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。也要用适当的关联词把句与句串联起来。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。