题目内容
16.下面是某英文杂志栏目刊登的一位消费者受广告欺骗的一次购物经历,请你参照这篇短文和以下四副图片,给该英文杂志栏目写一篇关于你购买照相机的经历.注意:①词数100左右,开头已写好,不计入字数;②可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;④参考词汇:冲洗develop,胶卷film.
Be smart about advertisements!
People cannot get away from advertisements which promise cheap goods and free gifts.Last week,I read an advertisement for a sale.Seeing the attractive prices for the goods,I couldn't help driving to the supermarket.As the advertisement said,most of the things there were much cheaper than usual.In no time,I filled two baskets with ten bars of soap,two very nice-looking kitchen knives and so on.When my husband got home and saw all the things I bought,he asked me to think about what I needed all these things for.There was already enough soap at home,and there were already two knives in the kitchen drawer.I think I should be smart about advertisements in future and not be tricked by them.

分析 本文为读写任务作文.
写作主题可以为:理智购物
写作分析:从短文内容可以看出女主买了自己不需要的东西,因为家里已经有肥皂和餐刀,仅仅因为东西的价格非常便宜;而图片的主人公更惨,因为相机价格非常便宜,而买了坏的相机.由此可以得出:不要因为价格而买了自己不需要的东西;更不要只看价格而不考虑东西的质量,买了劣质产品.我们都需要理智消费.
写作要点为:1,描述短文及图画内容;2,分析原因;3,提供建议.
解答 People cannot get away from advertisements which promise cheap goods and free gifts,nor can I.I had a very bad experience of buying a camera because of falling for advertisements.
Last Wednesday,when I was walking in the street,I saw an advertisement in front of a shop saying that the cameras were on sale for only 20 yuan each.Seeing the attractive prices,I couldn't help entering the shop to buy one and two rolls of films.I was so excited that I couldn't wait to invite my friends to take photos in the nearby park,where we had a good time and took lots of pictures.After that,I sent the films to a shop to be developed.
Unfortunately,when I went to collect my photos this morning,I was surprised to be told that none of my photos came out.At that time I regretted getting a bargain for 20 yuan and I thought I should be smart about advertisements in future and not be tricked by them.
点评 考生需根据图画信息,揭示图画中的道理,根据所提供信息提炼文章的写作主题,需了解写作要点及写作意图,仔细构思写作结构,平时注意积累词汇及语法知识.

Edison was born in Milan,Ohio,and grew up in Port Huron,Michigan.He was the seventh and last child of his family.When he was young,Edison stayed at home and was taught by his mother.Edison recalled later,"My mother was the making of me.She was so true,so sure of me; and I felt I had someone to live for,someone I must not disappoint."During his childhood,he suffered from scarlet fever which affected his hearing.
Young Edison sold candy and newspapers on trains running from Port Huron to Detroit,and he sold vegetables to supplement his income.These jobs,though insignificant,inspired him greatly.He realized that he had a talent for business.These talents eventually made him founder of 14 companies,including General Electric,which is still in existence and is the largest publicly traded company in the world.
Edison started as a telegraph operator and this was the field in which he came up with the first invention.The invention which first gained him fame was the phonograph in 1877.The invention seemed magical,as nothing similar had ever been thought of before.Funded by the successful sale of the telegraph at a price of $10,000,Edison built his own research laboratory in Menlo Park,New Jersey.
The laboratory expanded rapidly over the decade.In 1892,it was confirmed that Edison was the official inventor of the carbon microphones,which was used in all telephones.Although he attempted to make use of X-rays to take radiographs,he quit the project and admitted his fear of X-rays in public.
Thomas Edison died of diabetes at his home in New Jersey,on October 18,1931 and in honor of his contributions,Life magazine (USA),in a special double issue in 1997,placed Edison first in the list of the"100 Most Important People in the Last 1000 Years",noting that the light bulb he promoted"lit up the world".
Title:Thomas Edison-an influential person in the American history
Edison's (71)contributionsto society | ◆He invented many things that greatly influenced life around the world,(72)likethe phonograph,the motion picture camera,a long-lasting,practical electric light bulb and the carbon microphone. ◆He set up the first industrial (73)researchlaboratory. ◆He put (74)forwardthe concept of providing electricity for home. ◆He (75)founded/started14 companies,including General Electric,which is still in existence and is the largest publicly traded company in the world. |
The life experience of Edison | ◆He was born in Milan and was the youngest of seven children in his family. ◆(76)Insteadof receiving schooling,Edison was taught by his mother at home. ◆The scarlet fever he suffered (77)led/contributedto hearing loss. ◆To earn a living,Edison sold newspapers,candy and vegetables,which (78)inspired/encouragedhim and helped him discover his talent for business. ◆Later,he worked in the field of telecommunication as an telegraph operator,where he invented phonograph in 1877,which gained him great fame. ◆After he created his research laboratory,he (79)gaveup the project of making use of X-rays to take radiographs due to his fear of radiation. ◆He died of diabetes at his home in New Jersey in 1931. |
The honor given to Edison | ◆He was placed first in the list of the"100 Most (80)ImportantPeople in the Last 1000 Years",noting that the light bulb he promoted"lit up the world". |