Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Bicycle ride is the least expensive way of traveling apart from walking. If you travel by the bicycle, you don't have to buy gas as you must when you driving cars. Beside, it has much less mechanical troubles than a car.

Bicycle riding is only good for the body and saving money, but also good for the environments because it is quiet but does not pollute the air. This benefit is especially good, because it helps others as good as yourself.

Another benefit you share to others is the lessening of traffic jams. This reduces the stress of drivers and walkers.

 

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