题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,用英语写一篇日记。记述上周末你和你的英国朋友Jim用微信支付购物的过程。
注意:词数不少于60。
提示词:二维码QR code; 糖葫芦candy-coated haws(tanghulu)
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【答案】It seems that everything in China is new to my British friend, Jim.
Last weekend, when Jim and I were wandering on the streets, enjoying the beautiful scenery and fresh air of spring, a candy-coated haws stand caught his attention. Having never tasted a candy-coated haw, he immediately went up to buy one.
However, the vendor shook her head when seeing the 100-yuan note Jim handed over to her. She had no change! How disappointed Jim was! He was about to quit when I took out my cellphone, scanned the QR code on the stand and paid the vendor 5 yuan.
Jim was surprised at what I had done. Then I explained to him that nowadays in China QR codes were everywhere, and we could pay with a cellphone for almost everything. “Wow!” Jim said, “The candy-coated haw tastes great, and the payment method seems even greater!”
【解析】这是一篇看图作文。要求考生根据四幅图的内容,写一篇日记。那么,首先,这篇文章应该以过去时态为主。其次,考生应该详细观察每幅图,把握每副图的内容:1. Jim想买糖葫芦。2. Jim用现金支付,遇到困难。3. 李华用微信帮Jim付钱。4. 李华给Jim介绍微信支付,Jim的感受。
【亮点说明】所给范文正确的描述了图画内容,条理清楚,叙事明确。适当运用了较高级的词汇或句型。例如:1. 非谓语动词enjoying the beautiful scenery and fresh air of spring,Having never tasted a candy-coated haw 2. 感叹句How disappointed Jim was 3. 宾语从句what I had done,that nowadays in China QR codes were everywhere 4. 词汇,句式:catch one’s attention;be about to do when…