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2．随着科技的发展，网络进入我们的日常生活，因此网上购物变得越来越普遍．《21世纪报》就网上购物进行了讨论，请你根据以下内容为其投稿．
1．网上购物的优势：
足不出户就可以满足购物要求；商品价格相对便宜；操作简单．
2．网上购物的不足：
商品存在质量隐患；广告的可信度不确定；容易上当受骗．
3．你的观点：
注意：l．词数100左右；2．短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）．
参考词汇：quality质量
With the development of science and technology，the Internet comes into our everyday life．It helps us in many ways．Shopping：online is a good example．…
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分析 高分句型一：
We can buy the things that we want on the Internet without leaving our homes
我们可以足不出户的在网络上购买到我们想要的东西
高分句型二：
Though it is convenient and fast to shop on the Internet，there is still something for us to worry about．
尽管在网上购物很方便，但仍旧存在一些让人担忧的事
句型一 that we want on the Internet without leaving our homes 该句是一个由that引导的定语从句，that在句中充当宾语，替代前面出现的先行词 things
句型二 Though it is convenient and fast to shop on the Internet 该句是一个由though引导的让步状语从句，而从句中的主语由形式主语it充当，真正的主语为不定式 to shop
此外，还使用了以下高级词汇和固定短语：with the development of 伴随着．．的发展  after all 毕竟

解答 With the development of science，the Internet has come into our everyday life．it helps us in many ways．Shopping is a good example．We can buy the things that we want on the Internet without leaving our homes．（高分句型一）Shopping on the Internet can save us a lot of time．What's more，the goods may be even cheaper than those in shops．（描述优点）
 Though it is convenient and fast to shop on the Internet，there is still something for us to worry about．（高分句型二）Quality is a big problem．We can't see the goods on the Internet．After all，we can't choose them ourselves．Besides，lots of advertisements on the Internet are untrustworthy，so sometimes we are easily cheated．（描述缺点）
   Therefore，we should be careful while we're enjoying the convenience of high technology．（提出建议）

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．