Question

假定你是李华，你昨天收到好友Tom的来信，他即将要进入高中，向你询问怎样在一所新学校交朋友， 请你给他写一封回信，就如何交朋友方面提一些建议并给出理由：

1.对待他人要友好。如果你这样做,别人会乐意和你交朋友，因为你是个容易相处的人;

2.多参加课外活动。通过这样做,你会找到一些和你有共同兴趣爱好的人；

3.......

 

注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.词数100-120；

3.信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you are about to start high school and want to make friends there. ________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Tom

I’m glad to hear that you are about to start high school and want to make friends there. Here are some tips to help you.

First, why not be friendly to others ? If you do this, your classmates will enjoy making friends with you , for you are easy to get along with. Secondly, you’d better join in after-class activities. By doing this, you will find classmates with the same interests so that you can share your happiness and sorrow together. Thirdly, it would be a good idea to remember the names of your classmates. That way, they feel you are concerned about them and are willing to share their deepest feelings and thoughts.

I hope you will find these ideas useful and make good friends with your new classmates as soon as possible.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文，要求以李华的口吻写一封信，关于在新学校如何交友。要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点包括：1.对待他人要友好。如果你这样做,别人会乐意和你交朋友，因为你是个容易相处的人;2.多参加课外活动。通过这样做,你会找到一些和你有共同兴趣爱好的人；3.......；

写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。

亮点说明：这篇范文里较好的运用了连接词，如：First、Secondly、Thirdly；同时状语从句的使用也较多，如By doing this, you will find classmates with the same interests so that you can share your happiness and sorrow together.中so that引导的目的状语从句。

考点：考查提纲类作文