Question

2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．
In 1989，fresh out of high school，I had the difficult task of choosing a career path before college started in three months．In those days in Pakistan，there were limited options：becoming a doctor or an engineer，or entering the financial world after getting a business degree．I wasn't interested in engineering，so that I was left with medicine or business．I couldn't decide．
My uncle，one of the elders in the family，suggested that I do a work placement to experience it for a month in

an international company followed by a month in a hospital．After that，I could make a decision．It seemed like a brilliant idea．
I was accepted for a month's placement at a foreign bank in Karachi．I got a feel for how the world of finance functioned，made new friends，and generally enjoyed the mostly easy-going work surroundings．
The month passed rapidly，and soon I began working at a leading hospital in Karachi．The experience couldn't have been more different．The hospital had an intense environment．The days started early （at 7am，compared to 9am at the bank），and were filled with endless duties．And the night calls!This was crazy，working all day，through the night，and again the next day．
I began thinking about my two experiences．The bank had offered a more relaxing atmosphere，better working hours and less stress．The hospital was full of excitement，and unpredictability，but the studying and training was difficult．It seemed that the business option was going to win out．
Near the end of my month at the hospital，I was driving home after an especially busy night call．In front of me was a public bus，with college students sitting on the top．As the driver weaved through traffic，I could see the boys shaking from side to side．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2．应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．
Paragraph 1：
Suddenly，a boy fell off the back of the bus．He hit the road face down and rolled over．He lay motionless in the middle of the road as the bus drove away quickly．The cars directly behind the bus braked to avoid the boy，but none stopped．I knew that if the boy was bleeding into his brain，he could die soon．I stopped my car．I lifted his unconscious body into my car with the help of some passersby and raced back to the hospital．
Paragraph 2：
The next day，when I went to see the boy，all his family got up，with grateful smiles on their faces．The mother held my hands and started weeping．"Son，you are an angel，"she repeated over and over again．After comforting her，I went over to the boy．He managed to smile and squeeze my hand．No words were spoken between us-none was needed．I spent the rest of the day in a state of excitement，the most fabulous mood I had ever experienced．Driving home that evening，I knew what I wanted to do for the rest of my life．My career path became crystal clear at that moment．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
I knew that if the boy was bleeding into his brain，he could die soon
我知道如果这个男孩血液流入他的大脑，他会死的很快．
高分句型二：
Driving home that evening，I knew what I wanted to do for the rest of my life．My career path became crystal clear at that moment．
开车回家的那天晚上，我知道我想做的事在我的余下的生命里．在那一刻，我的职业生涯开始变得晶莹剔透．

解答 Suddenly，a boy fell off the back of the bus．He hit the road face down and rolled over．He lay motionless in the middle of the road as the bus drove away quickly．The cars directly behind the bus braked to avoid the boy，but none stopped．I knew that if the boy was bleeding into his brain，he could die soon（高分句型一）．I stopped my car．I lifted his unconscious body into my car with the help of some passersby and raced back to the hospital．
The next day，when I went to see the boy，all his family got up，with grateful smiles on their faces．The mother held my hands and started weeping．"Son，you are an angel，"she repeated over and over again．After comforting her，I went over to the boy．He managed to smile and squeeze my hand．No words were spoken between us-none was needed．I spent the rest of the day in a state of excitement，the most fabulous mood I had ever experienced．Driving home that evening，I knew what I wanted to do for the rest of my life．My career path became crystal clear at that moment（高分句型二）．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．