Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Wearing a pair of worn-out shoe, he wandered in the street. Though hungry, he could not find a penny in his pockets. Unfortunate, he became homeless, everyone in her family had cut off connection with him. Mild songs from the nearest house remind him of his every part in acting. Up from now, he has star in more than 80 films, that have entertained many people. He was considered to be a outstanding actor. It was convincing that he would picked out to challenge the Oscar this year. But in now everything has changed.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 shoe--shoes

 Unfortunate--Unfortunately

 her--his

 remind--reminded

 from--to

 star--starred

 that--which

 a--an

 ∧be picked

 去掉in

【解析】

试题分析：文章介绍了一个演员的不幸遭遇，他与家人失去了联系，身无分文，路边的音乐让他想起了他的演艺生涯。题目主要考查学生对名词、副词、时态、定语从句、被动语态等的掌握情况。

 a pair of worn-out shoes一双破旧的鞋子，应该用复数，故把shoe改成shoes。

 修饰整个句子用副词，Unfortunately不幸的是，故把Unfortunate改成Unfortunately。

 根据“he became homeless”可知，他与所有的家人都中断了联系，故把her改成his。

 根据第一行和第二行的“wandered, became”可知，文章用的是一般过去时，故把remind改成reminded。

 up to直到，up to now到目前为止，故把from改成to。

 现在完成时has后用过去分词，star主演，过去分词是双写r加ed，故把star改成starred。

 根据逗号可知，是非限制性定语从句，非限制性定语从句不能使用that，故把that改成which。

 outstanding突出的，首字母发音是元音，故把a改成an。

 he与pick out是动宾关系，即他被挑选出来角逐奥斯卡，应该使用被动语态，故在picked前加be。

 但是，现在一切都改变了。in多余，故把in去掉。

考点：名词复数；副词；时态；冠词；被动语态；定语从句