题目内容
4.下面短文中有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
例如:
I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long,a train inspector comes to check out tickets.A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket,which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before.Yet,they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need,the world would be a better place to live in.
分析 文章大意:本文主要叙述了作者在火车上的一次经历.一位乘客丢了票,感到很是伤心,然后其他的乘客帮助他找票,最后在离这个人好几排的座位下面找到了这张票.火车上的乘客之前都是没有见过面的陌生人,然而,但有人有困难,大家一起帮忙.只要人人献出一点爱,这个世界将会变得更美好.
解答 短文改错:
1.had去掉 考查时态.此处只需一般过去式来描述过去的动作,而并没有体现这个动作发生在某个过去的动作之前.
2.noise-noisy 考查形容词.名词误用为形容词.be动词之后应用形容词,而noise为名词,故应改为其形容词形式noisy.
3.comes-came 考查时态.整篇通用一般过去式,此处与全文时态不一致.
4.but-and 行文逻辑.那个乘客是因为找不到票了感到沮丧,顺接,没有转折的含义.
5.searching 后加for 考查动词.此题考查search的用法.Search for+n.寻找某物,search somewhere for sth.在某地寻找某物.
6.his-its/the 考查代词.代词的误用,票的主人用its或用the 来特指那个主人.
7.a-the 考查冠词.找到的就是之前提到过的"那张票",故用the特指.
8.previous-previously 考查副词.动词应用副词来修饰,此处将形容词误用为副词.
9.strangers-stranger 考查名词.此处的"陌生人"指的就是前文提到的丢票的那个人,无需用复数.
10.on-in 考查介词短语搭配.in need 在困难中,在危难时.
点评 考查此类题型要注意每一句中所涉及的语法考点,弄清楚句子里是否有使用不当的地方,如果有,根据上下文语境以及语法规则,进行适当修改.
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