Question

假如你叫李军，是一位成绩优秀的学生，你班班主任在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生做同桌，这在你们班成绩优秀的学生中引起了反响，班会课上大家就此进行了讨论。现在请你根据下表把讨论结果向班主任写一封信反映一下，并说出自己的观点。

赞同	1．人人有长处和不足，成绩差的学生也有可取之处；
2．相互学习，建立友谊；
3．在学习上帮助学习差的学生，从而使他们建立自信。
反对	1．部分成绩差的学生常常上课说话、违反校规校纪；
2．担心自己会受影响，会养成坏习惯；
3．他们老是问问题，使自己不能专心学习。
自己的观点	1．… 2．…

注意：1．词数：120-150词左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

2．短文需包括表中所有要点，内容可适当发挥，使行文连贯。

3．参考词汇：成绩差的学生：a slower student长处：strength 缺点：weakness

Dear Mr．Zhang,

We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student．

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr．Zhang,

We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.

Some are for the idea．In their opinion, everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses．Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in other fields like sports or arts．Therefore, they can learn from each other, and they may develop friendship．In addition, top students can help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons, which benefits them all.

However, others don’t hold the same view．They think some slower students are always making trouble, such as keeping talking in class and breaking school rules, which may lead to their forming bad habits．Besides, slower students often ask top students questions, which has a bad effect on their studies.

In my opinion, I’d like to choose to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other and make progress together．

Yours,

Li Jun

【解析】

试题分析：本篇写作题材是对于让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生坐同桌的两种不同观点。这种文章一般分四段：第一段为总述；第二段正方观点及依据；第三段反方观点及依据；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。

【亮点说明】范文的特点是句式多变，Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in other fields like sports or arts．这句话用了让步状语从句， They think some slower students are always making trouble, such as keeping talking in class and breaking school rules, which may lead to their forming bad habits．这句话用了非限制性定语从句，slower students often ask top students questions, which has a bad effect on their studies.这句话用了非限制性定语从句，I’d like to choose to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other and make progress together．这句话用了so that句型，.还有文章还使用了 Therefore, In addition,However, Besides, In my opinion,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。

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