题目内容
8.假定你是李华,本已约好与Kelvin今天(4月8日)晚上一起看电影《捉妖记》(Monster Hunt).但你临时有事,他打篮球未回,故给他写留言条.要点如下:1.临时有事要做.
2.具体更改的见面时间、地点.
3.此事已告知谁.
4.见字告知.
注意:1.词数100左右.2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3.开头结尾已给.
分析 在写作时,考生需先确定时态为一般现在时,在表示将来见面的时间和地点时需用 一般将来时;
(高分句型一)I am going to tell you that as I have something important to attend this evening,so I can't go to see the movie,Monster Hunt,with you this evening.
在告知临时有事,使用了that引导的宾语从句,句意为因为我有重要的事情要做,所以我不能去看电影,so引导一个结果状语从句;
(高分句型二)If this change is not convenient to you,it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie.
该句型首先是if引导的条件状语从句,如果这个改变对你不方便的话,最好告诉我,以便我们确定其他时间;句子里so that引导状语从句.
解答 April 8
(告知临时有事情)Hi Kelvin,(高分句型一)I am going to tell you that as I have something important to attend this evening,so I can't go to see the movie,Monster Hunt,with you this evening.And I have to change it to another place,the Wanda Cinema.(更改的时间和地点)We will meet together at 7:00 p.m.at the gate of the cinema tomorrow evening.I have already told your parents about this change when you were out to play basketball.(高分句型二)If this change is not convenient to you,it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型