Question

【题目】最近我校举办了一次英语书法比赛。大部分同学积极参与,但少数同学书写不好,也不愿改善。请你根据以下提示,给二十一世纪英文报写一篇短文,分析该现象产生的原因并发表自己的看法。

现象：一些学生不善书写,也不愿改善书写

原因：1.可以借助电脑,没有必要练字;

2.功课太忙,没时间练字;

3.练字见效慢,很难练好。

你的看法：……

注意:1.词数120左右；2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。

In order to arouse the students’ interest in English learning and enrich our school life,

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Answer 1

【答案】

In order to arouse the students’ interest in English learning and enrich our school life, we held an English Handwriting Competition. Many students took an active part in the activity. However, some students who are poor at handwriting don’t want to improve their handwriting. The reasons are as follows:

On one hand, they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer. On the other hand, they believe that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice. Besides, practicing handwriting is so difficult that they can’t make great progress in a short time.

In my view, Students’ beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to themselves. What’s more, good handwriting is always appreciated by people, especially by teachers. Therefore, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.

【解析】

试题分析：最近我校举办了一次英语书法比赛。大部分同学积极参与,但少数同学书写不好,也不愿改善。请你根据以下提示,给二十一世纪英文报写一篇短文,分析该现象产生的原因并发表自己的看法。现象：一些学生不善书写,也不愿改善书写.原因：1.可以借助电脑,没有必要练字; 2.功课太忙,没时间练字;3.练字见效慢,很难练好。你的看法：……. 写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1.词数120左右；2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】In order to arouse the students’ interest in English learning and enrich our school life,动词不定式表示目的状语；However, some students who are poor at handwriting don’t want to improve their handwriting.句中运用了定语从句；On one hand, they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer.宾语从句和原因状语从句完美结合；Besides, practicing handwriting is so difficult that they can’t make great progress in a short time.结果状语从句出现在句中；What’s more, good handwriting is always appreciated by people, especially by teachers. Therefore, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.句中运用了被动语态；另外文章中使用了丰富的高级词汇、短语However, On one hand, On the other hand, Besides, What’s more, Therefore,使文章大放异彩。