Question

现在，很多中学生每天长时间用耳机听音乐、学英语。你的英语笔友李平也是如此。最近他在来信中提到感觉头痛、注意力不集中、记忆力减退。请你就此回信谈谈你的观点和建议。

写作要点：

    1．简述过度使用耳机的现象；

    2．分析过度使用耳机的危害；（至少两点）

    3．提出你的建议。(至少两条)

注意：

         1．要点齐全，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯；

         2．字数120左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

         3．可能用到的词汇：耳机earphone

Dear Li Ping,

I received your letter yesterday...

 

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Best wishes.

                                                   Yours,

                        Lin Tao

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones.

As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing.

There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon.

Best wishes.

Yours,                                                                  Lin Tao

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。现在，很多中学生每天长时间用耳机听音乐、学英语。你的英语笔友李平也是如此。最近他在来信中提到感觉头痛、注意力不集中、记忆力减退。请你就此回信谈谈你的观点和建议。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可，尤其注意一定要写出自己的建议。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study.是动名词短语作主语。There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English.包含一个定语从句。

考点：话题类书面表达