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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The other day, I together with several friends went back to a nearby hospital to do some voluntary works. We helped some patients cleaned their rooms and did everything we could serve them. I noticed a little girl between the patients. Though she was weak, but she was lovely and active. He asked to sing a song for us in return for our kindness. Stood in front of us, she began to sing. Great to our surprise, her voice was so beautifully that it fascinated us all. After that, we had the talk with her. She told us that her wish was to become a singer. We encouraged her to follow her dream.

【答案】1. works→work

2. cleaned→clean

3. couldserve之间加to

4. between→among

5. 去掉but

6. He→She

7. Stood→Standing

8. Great→Greatly

9. beautifully→beautiful

10. the→a

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。作者跟几个朋友去医院做义工,在那里见到一个女孩唱歌很好听,想成为一名歌手。

1. 考查名词。句意:前几天,我和几个朋友一起回附近的医院做义工。work作“工作”讲时是不可数名词,所以用单数形式。故将works改为work

2. 考查时态。help sb. do sth.是固定用法,所以用clean的原形。故将cleaned改为clean

3. 考查动词不定式。句意:我们帮助一些病人打扫房间,尽我们所能为他们服务。此处everything we coulddid的宾语,应在could后加to表目的。故couldserve之间加to

4. 考查介词。between多指两者之间;among指三者或三者以上的同类事物之间。后面的名词patients指医院的病人,肯定不止两个,所以用介词among。故将between改为among

5. 考查连词。句意:虽然她很虚弱,但她很可爱,很活跃。连词thoughbut不能连用。故去掉but

6. 考查代词。根据前两句内容可知,此处指代前面提到的a girl,应用代词she。故将He改为She

7. 考查非谓语动词。句意:站在我们面前,她开始唱歌。此处表示伴随状语,主语she与动词stand之间是主动关系,应用现在分词。故将Stood改为Standing

8. 考查副词。句意:令我们大吃一惊的是,她的声音如此优美,使我们大家都着迷。此处应用副词修饰逗号前面的部分。故将Great改为Greatly

9. 考查形容词。so后面形容词,此处应用形容词修饰名词her voice。故将beautifully 改为beautiful

10. 考查冠词。have a talk是固定短语,意为“谈话”。故将the改为a

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【题目】请认真阅读下面有关不同年龄达到不同能力巅峰的研究结果,并根据要求用英语写一篇 150字左右的文章。

“At almost any given age, most of us are getting better at some things and worse at others,” Joshua Hartshorne, an MIT cognitive science researcher and the lead author of a study looking at how intelligence changes as we age, told Business Insider.

The team behind that study quizzed thousands of people aged 10-90 on their ability to do things like remembering lists of words, recognizing faces. Their results suggest that no matter what your age, there’s almost always a new peak on the horizon.

1.用约 30 个单词概述图表和上文的主要内容;

2.用约 120 个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:

(1)谈谈不同年龄达到不同能力巅峰这一研究发现的意义(至少两点)

(2)结合自身实际,说明如何在现阶段把握你的优势。

(写作要求)

(1) 须表明个人观点,同时提供理由或依据;

(2) 阐述观点或提供论据时,不得直接引用原文中的句子;

(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

(4) 不必写标题。

(评分标准) 内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

注意:作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

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