Question

19．假如你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华，最近你校开展了诚信教育（Honesty Education）系列活动，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊"英语园地"写一篇短文，记述你和同学们参与活动的全过程．
注意：1．词数不少于60；
=2．短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
宣誓：take an oath   无人监考：no-invigilation exam

Recently  to carry forward the value of honesty．A variety of activities have been held in our school．Our classalso got involved in it．We held an honesty-themed class meeting．All the students discussed what honesty meant to us and brought forward various ideas about how to encourage honest behaviors．Finally we agreed on trying no-invigilation exams．Then led by our monitor，we took an oath that we would take any test honestly without invigilators．In the following exams，we did as that we had promised．The result was amazing：no one cheated and we felt a stronger self-respect and responsibility．A good deed speaks for itself and we got an award as an Honest Class．Honesty inthe best policy．How trueit is!．

Answer 1

分析 本文是看图作文，根据所提供的一幅图和所给要点信息为校刊写一篇短文，记述班级同学参加"诚信教育"系列活动的全过程．写作要点：1．全班同学开班会，围绕"诚信"展开讨论；2．在班长的带领下，全班宣誓；3．在以后的考试中，在无人监考考场同学们都能诚信考试；4．班级荣获"诚信班集体"称号．又属于提纲作文．在写作时人称用第一人称和第三人称．时态以一般过去时为主．重要短语：carry forward （发扬，弘扬），a variety of （各种各样的），get involved in （牵涉，牵扯，涉及），take an oath发誓，宣誓，bring forward （提出），agreed on （一致同意），speak for（顺便说），hold an class meeting（开班会）．
【高分句型】

1．Recently，to carry forward the value of honesty，a variety of activities have been held in our school．
这里是不定式作目的状语．主句中用了现在完成时的被动语态．
2．Then led by our monitor，we took an oath that we would take any test honestly without invigilators．
这里是过去分词led作状语，主句为we took an oath that we would take any test honestly without invigilators．主句中的主语we与所给动词lead构成逻辑上的被动关系．

解答 Recently，to carry forward the value of honesty，a variety of activities have been heldin our school．【高分句型】Our class also got involved in it．We held an honesty-themed class meeting．（开头-引出话题） All the students discussed what honestymeant to us and brought forward various ideas about how to encourage honestbehaviors．Finally weagreed on trying no-invigilation exams．（Picture 1）Then led by our monitor，we took an oath that we would take anytest honestly without invigilators．【高分句型】（Picture 2）In the following exams，we did as that we had promised．The result was amazing：no one cheated and we felt a strongerself-respect and responsibility．（Picture 3）A good deed speaks for itself and we got an award as an Honest Class．（Picture 4）Honesty is the best policy．How true it is!（结尾）

点评 看图作文要求将画面所包含的有效信息用文字表达出来，并适当拓展并发挥想象．如果是记叙文类的素材，要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素；如果是说明文或议论文，首先要对图画的内容进行描述，然后围绕图画的信息进行说明或议论．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．