Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以

下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或

修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that Senior Three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am al?lowed to do that,I'll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can't accept her ideas. In my opinion,watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day's hard works. Besides,it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus,we shouldn't be forbidden to watch TV.

Answer 1

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