题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的英国网友Tom打算抽空到中国学习太极( Tai Chi),他写信向你求助,请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信:
1.介绍学太极好处;
2.负责联系学习地点和老师。
注意:1.词数100左右;信的开头已经写好。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to leam it soon. I'm quite sure that I can give you a hand gladly.
Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art(武术), but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Concentrating on correct posture(姿势)and breathing control, Tai chi's movements are fluid, graceful and well-balanced(流畅、优雅、协调), thus promoting the complete harmony of body and mind. Besides, Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives.
As for your learning location and instructor, I' m so proud to tell you that I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you, for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country. As a consequence, you can rely on me.
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文是一封书信。假如你是李华,你的英国网友Tom打算抽空到中国学习太极( Tai Chi),他写信向你求助,请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信:介绍学太极好处;负责联系学习地点和老师。写好此文,需注意三点:一是写信格式要准确,切记要写好信的开头和结尾;二是要详略得当,重点突出;三要注意适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。另外,在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
【亮点说明】
本文是一封书信,格式正确,内容符合要求,要点突出,文章布局合理,文中使用高级句子和词汇。It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to leam it soon.动词不定式复合结构做真正主语,同时包含一个宾语从句;Concentrating on correct posture(姿势)and breathing control, Tai chi's movements are fluid, graceful and well-balanced(流畅、优雅、协调), thus promoting the complete harmony of body and mind.现在分词做原因状语和结果状语;Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country.句中who引导非限制性定语从句;另外,thus,Besides, As for,As a consequence,等的运用是文章更显风采。