Question

假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）。

 

注意：1. 词数100左右；文章开头已写出，不计入总词数。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇：住宿accommodation

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am a student in China and I plan to

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend the summer school during the vacation.

I’ve seen your ad., and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be any host family or university dormitory?

I am looking forward to your early replay.

Yours faithfully

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于图表类作文，文章要写的重点内容反映在纯英文的图表中，这无疑增加了写作的难度。但认真审题之后，其实也不难看出其写作要点包括：说明写信的目的；询问：开课时间和每周上课时间、班级大小、收费情况、住宿类型。此外要明确在写作时要用第一人称，基本时态以现在时为主。

【亮点说明】

范文要点全面，时态清晰，词汇使用规范。尤其是在主体段落中的表达清晰自然，使用了First, Besides,来串联句子，且在表述中注意了句式的变换，所询问的内容不一定都用问句来表述，恰当地使用了宾语从句“I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. ”使得文章简洁而不简单，是一篇考场佳作！