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写作

阅读下面短文, 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Luck or hard work

　　Is it luck or hard work that brings success? The answer is “hard work”．One's efforts bring him success and not his luck．It is said, “Triumphs don't come without effort.”

　　Luck favors only those who help themselves．The harder you work, the luckier you get．A man works day and night giving up all his play and delight and moves ahead to earn success and when he earned it people called it luck．This excellence is in fact not luck, but result of a lot of hard work．Any idea cannot become a success unless we work hard on it．

　　Today we are leading a happy and comfortable life due to hard work of someone else．We have bulbs to remove the darkness in a room; this was possible by hard work of Edison．We chat over phone with our friends, enjoying which has resulted by the hard work put in by Alexander Graham Bell．

　　The world lifts its hats up to one who puts 50 percent of their efforts and on its head for those few soul who devote 100 percent thus．“Success accompanies only those who work hard and not the ones who hardly work.”

[写作内容]

(1)以约30个词概括短文的要点；

(2)然后以120个词就“成功是靠运气还是努力”这个主题发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：

1．人们对如何取得成功看法有哪些?

2．他们有何实例证明自己的观点?

3．你的观点如何?为什么?

[写作要求]

(1)可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

(2)标题自定。

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Answer 1

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解析：

One possible version：

Good Luck Always Comes With Hard Work

　　It is hard work rather than luck that brings people success．Those who are considered to be successful must have been working hard to achieve their goal and their success can also benefit others．

　　Some people argue that one can not succeed unless he works very hard．There are many examples to show that success comes from hard work．One example is that Madam Curie had been working all day and all night before she made the great discovery of radium．

　　Other people think that luck and opportunity are more important than hard work．They argue that even if one works hard, he can not succeed without luck and opportunity．For instance, a film star, Zhang Ziyi, could never be famous if she was not given a chance to play a role in the film．

　　I think that both hard work and good luck are important．If one wants to be successful, he has to work hard on one hand and he has to seize the opportunity and luck on the other．These two factors are essential for one's success．

　　[评分标准]概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。