Question

4．假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华．你校将于6月26日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团．你受学校委托，负责安排在津的一日活动．请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见．
上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；
中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；
下午与我校学生游览海河．
注意：
1．词数不少于100；
2．可是当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数．
参考词汇：
海河 the Haihe River
Dear Mr Smith
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School．We're pleased to hear that your US School Delegation will pay a visit to our school in Tianjin，China．With the commission of our school headmaster，I'm fully responsible for your one-day tour to our
school and our city．The following are our preliminary arrangements for your review and comments．
Students from both countries will hold a discussion in the morning to enhance their understanding．The topics to be discussed include but not limited to campus life，culture differences and so on．America students are cordially invited to share traditional Chinese dinner with us；
the main courses are our local cruises，including Chinese noodles and water dumplings．In the afternoon，after a short rest，we will visit Haihe River by boat，seeing the wonderful and beautiful scenes of Haihe，witnessing the great changes that have taken place in Tianjin during the past few years．
Please feedback whether you're satisfied with this schedule，and we
will make changes as per your opinion in due course．
Yours sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本作文为书信，书信格式已在题目中已提供．考生需根据所列出的提纲回信，内容应包括提纲里的内容．时态为一般过去时和一般现在时．人称为第一人称．重要短语：with the commission of （受…委任），preliminary arrangements（初步安排），enhance（提高，增强），be limited to（局限于），cordially（真诚地），cruises（游览），as per（按照），in due course（到时候）．

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School．We're pleased to hear that your US School Delegation will
pay a visit to our school in Tianjin，China．With the commission of our school headmaster，I'm fully responsible for your one-day tour to our
school and our city．The following are our preliminary arrangements foryour review and comments．（开头：意图）
   Students from both countries will hold a discussion in the morningto enhance their understanding．The topics to be discussed include but not limited to campus life，culture differences and so on．（上午活动安排：座谈）America students are cordially invited to share traditional Chinese dinner with us；the main courses are our local cruises，including Chinese noodles and water dumplings．（中午共同进餐）In the afternoon，after a short rest，we will visit Haihe River by boat，seeing the wonderful and beautiful scenes of Haihe，witnessing the great changes that have taken place in Tianjin during thepast few years．（下午安排）【高分句型】
   Please feedback whether you're satisfied with this schedule，and we will make changes as per your opinion in due course．（结尾：期待回复）
                                                                         Yours sincerely
                                                                          Li Hua

点评 书信类作文还要注意书信格式．提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，写作逻辑循序是否合理．写作方面，考生在平时需注意积累短语和重要句型，可以根据话题来对短语进行归类，比如环保类题材，书信类题材，议论问体等等，这样写作文要用到时就能信手拈来，写出好文章来．