题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:把缺词处加个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I like traveling and my dream of visit Beijing, the capital city of our country, come true during the National Day holidays this year. In October 1st, I went to Tian’anmen Square with my parents, there we watched the flag-raising ceremony. As I watched flag rising slowly, I sang the national anthem, feeling extremely exciting. Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proudly. I thought of the old saying that “One who fail to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.” Although I was tired, but I really had a good time.
【答案】
【1】visit→visiting
【2】come→came
【3】In→On
【4】there→where
【5】flag前面加上the
【6】exciting→excited
【7】attraction→attractions
【8】proudly→proud
【9】fail→fails
【10】删去but,或but→yet
【解析】试题分析:本文介绍作者在国庆节去北京旅游的故事。
【1】visit→visiting 固定形式:dream of doing sth.梦想着做某事,故把visit改为visiting。
【2】come→came 根据下文可知,用一般过去时态,“今年国庆期间梦想变成现实”。故把come 改为came。
【3】In→On 在某一天用介词on,故把In改为On。
【4】there→where Tian’anmen Square作先行词,在后面的定语从句中作地点状语,故把there改为where。
【5】flag前面加上the 句意:当我观看国旗慢慢升起的时候。此处表示特指,故在flag前面加上the。
【6】exciting→excited 这里表示感到特别的兴奋。故把exciting改为excited。
【7】attraction→attractions some other+名词复数,故把attraction改为attractions。
【8】proudly→proud 句意:我感到自豪。形容词作表语,故把proudly改为proud。
【9】fail→fails 句意:不到长城非好汉。故把fail改为fails。
【10】删去but,或but改为yet Although引导让步状语从句,和but不能连用,故删去but,或but改为yet。
【知识拓展】
1.deep深的---deeply深深地;high高的---highly高度地;wide宽的---widely广泛地;close近的,亲密的---closely仔细地。
2.enter不能和into在同一句中使用;repeat不能和again在同一句中使用;return不能和back在同一句中使用;because/because of/as/since(因为),不能和so在用一句中出现;though/although/while/in spite of/despite(尽管),不能和but在同一句中使用。
【知识归纳】
以e结尾的形容词变成副词时,有的直接加ly ;有的把e去掉再加ly.possible---possibly; simple---simply; gentle---gently; terrible---terribly; true---truly; flexible---flexibly;immediate--- immediately; brave---bravely; wise---wisely;active---actively