Question

12．假设你是李华，你校高二年级正在组织北京大学（Beijing University）自主招生活动，请你根据以下要点提示给你在美国的表兄Andy写一封信．
要点如下：
（1）下周将进行校内选拔考试，凡通过该考核的同学将参加该大学于6月份组织的笔试和面试；
（2）你本人对此很感兴趣，正在积极准备．
（3）简要说明感兴趣的理由．
（4）但你对英语没有把握，希望Andy给出一些有关英语学习的建议．
（5）字数120左右．
参考词汇：选拔考试：the Selective Test    自主招生考试：the Admission Examinations．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息给你在美国的表兄Andy写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：下周将进行校内选拔考试，凡通过该考核的同学将参加该大学于6月份组织的笔试和面试；你本人对此很感兴趣，正在积极准备．简要说明感兴趣的理由；但你对英语没有把握，希望Andy给出一些有关英语学习的建议；字数120左右．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：On one hand，On the other hand，一方面…另一方面；get ready for对…做好准备；Therefore因此；look forward to 盼望；benefit  from从…中受益；
Those who pass the selective test held by our school next week will get the chance to have the interview by the teachers of Beijing University in June．（高分句型一）
On one hand，it can enrich my knowledge，offering more chances to reach the Top of science．（高分句型二）
On the other hand，I can experience a challenging life like you，which is beneficial for my career in the future．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Andy，
     How is everything going？I'm glad to know that our school has got an opportunity to help us to take the Admissions Examinations of Beijing University．Those who pass the selective test held by our school next week will get the chance to have the interview by the teachers of Beijing University in June．（高分句型一）
     You know，I am in Senior Three now and it has long been my dream to study there．On one hand，it can enrich my knowledge，offering more chances to reach the Top of science．（高分句型二）On the other hand，I can experience a challenging life like you，which is beneficial for my career in the future．（高分句型三）Therefore，I treasure this chance very much．
     Now，I am trying my best to get ready for the coming exams，but I'm not sure about English．Could you give me some advice on how to get well equipped with English knowledge before exams？I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice．
    I'm looking forward to your reply!
                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．