题目内容
15．我们知道一个人的成长过程是较为复杂的，其个性的形成和发展受诸多因素的影响，比如：家庭、学校、社会、朋友、书籍、名人等．假如某英文报向你约稿，了解至今哪些因素对你的成长影响最大．请你以Tracking My Growth为题，按以下要求写篇英语短文：1．选择并陈述对你的成长起着很大影响的家庭、学校、社会、朋友、书籍、名人等诸多因素中的两个或三个；
2．谈谈你的看法和理由．
注意：词数120左右，文章的开头已给出（不计入词数）．
Tracking My Growth
The process of growing up is complex for every person，for there are many influential factors in a person's growth as well as the development of his personality．
分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇短文，陈述对自己的成长起着很大影响的家庭、学校、社会、朋友、书籍、名人等诸多因素中的两个或三个及理由．
写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．选择并陈述对你的成长起着很大影响的家庭、学校、社会、朋友、书籍、名人等诸多因素中的两个或三个； 2．谈谈你的看法和理由．
重要短语：track sth（跟踪某物），the process of（…的过程），as well as （和、又、也），as for （关于），…source of （…的来源），play a significant role in （在…中起重要的作用），shape one's character （塑造某人的性格），influence sb（影响某人），more than（多于），discuss with sb（与某人讨论），frankly speaking（坦诚地说），offer sb
sth（提供某人某物）．
【高分句型一】
1．what has affected me most in both growth and personality are family and friends，the two equally important factors．
此处是由连接代词"what"引导的主语从句，连接代词"what"在主语从句中作主语，句子的谓语动词为"are"，表语为"family and friends，the two equally important factors"．
【高分句型二】
2．what they say and what they do play a significant role in shaping my character．
此处是由两个"what"引导的并列主语从句，"what"在主语从句中都分别作宾语，句子的谓语动词为"play"，宾语为"a significant role"．
【高分句型三】
3．Discussing with them builds up my personality．
此处是由"动名词短语"作主语，谓语动词用单数形式为"builds up"，宾语为"my personality"．
解答 Tracking My Growth
The process of growing up is complex for every person，for there are many influential factors in a person's growth as well as the development of his personality．As for me，what has affected me most in both growth and personality are family and friends，the two equally important factors．【高分句型一】（选择并陈述对成长起很大影响的家庭、朋友、两因素）
My family became my first surroundings when I was born．Since it's my most direct source of knowledge and experiences，what they say and what they do play a significant role in shaping my character．【高分句型二】（家庭影响及理由）
On the other hand，friends in some ways influence me more than my family does．Friends have many different opinions and personalities．Discussing with them builds up my personality．【高分句型三】Frankly speaking，I get lots of valuable things from my friends．（朋友影响及理由）
Family offers me warmth and care．Friends give me strength and horizons．Therefore，both of them are most influential in my growth．（总结）
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．
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