Question

13．假定你是李华，计划暑假找份兼职工作．下面的招聘广告引起了你的注意，请根据要点（箭头所指内容）写一封申请信．

注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节使行文连贯；
3．开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Mr．Smith，
I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's winter camp．                        
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 题目要求根据所给要点写一封申请信，表达自己想得到这份工作的意愿．写作要点包括：自我介绍；工作时间等几个方面．词数在100词左右，开头不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性．亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了定语从句、固定句型等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力．
亮点句型一：More importantly，I can speak English fluently，which will help me work with native teachers from England．更重要的是，我能说流利的英语，这将有助于我与当地教师一起工作．本句是非限制性定语从句，which指代主句的内容．
亮点句型二：I would really appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity．如果你能给我这次机会，我将不胜感激． I would really appreciate it if 是英语中的固定句型"如果…我将不胜感激"．

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's winter camp．I'm very interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job．
To begin with，I gain much experience of working with children from my part-time job as a babysitter．Besides，I have been a helpful assistant for both my English teacher and my classmates．More importantly，I can speak English fluently，which will help me work with native teachers from England．（亮点句型一） I will be available for the work on evenings and weekends and can start working from the end of this term．I would really appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity．（亮点句型二）
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．