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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people. Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, that was eventually found under a seat several rows from its owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success. No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.

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这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者乘火车去伦敦车站时，一名火车巡视员来查票。忽然，有一位乘客找不到他的车票了。于是，车厢的每个人都开始帮他找票。最终，这张丢失的车票被找到了。

第一处：考查时态。描述过去发生的事情，用一般过去时，所以去掉had。

第二处：考查形容词。这里作was后的表语，用形容词，所以noise改成noisy。

第三处：考查时态。句意：不久以后，一名火车巡视员来查票。描述过去发生的事情，用一般过去时，所以comes改成came。

第四处：考查连词。一名乘客意识到他找不到自己的票了，并且非常心烦。文中表示“并且”，是并列关系，所以but改成and。

第五处：考查固定短语。句意：然后，车厢的每个人都开始寻找票。search for寻找，该短语是固定短语，所以search后面加for。

第六处：考查非限制性定语从句。which was eventually found under a seat several rows from its owner.作定语修饰the ticket，有逗号把主从句分开，所以which was eventually found under a seat several rows from its owner.是一个非限制性定语从句，关系词在从句中作主语，指物，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，所以that改成which。

第七处：考查冠词。句意：找到这张票的人对于他的成功露出了满意的微笑。特指上文“丢失的那张票”，用定冠词the。

第八处：考查副词。先前，车厢中没有人和他说话，甚至没有人注意到这位车票拥有者。修饰动词短语spoken to，用副词，所以previous改成 previously。

第九处：考查名词单复数。句意：现在，他们很快为这位陌生人提供了帮助。文中“这位陌生人”是单数，所以strangers 改成stranger。

第十处：考查固定短语。句意：如果我们对处于困难中的其他人表示关心，这个世界将会变成更好的居住地。in need在困难中，该短语是固定短语，所以on改成in。

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删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。

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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

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