Question

假定你是西安某一中学高三学生李华。在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到如下的一个帖子:

??? With the college entrance examination approaching, quite a few students are suffering mental problems. It does great harm to their study and health. What can we do to help those students?

请你回帖，要点如下： 

1. 列出某些学生心理焦虑的现象；????? 2. 提出应该采取的对策（如积极态度和应对方法）。

注意：1. 文章的开头已经给出（不计人总词数），可适当发挥；

    ? 2. 词数：120左右。

?? I agree with what you said. That many students have some mental problems also worries me.?????????

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I agree with what you said. That many students have some mental problems also worries me. Some students are so worried about exams and academic achievements that they can’t fall asleep at night. Some are discouraged and tend to lose their confidence because of constant failure in exams. Others can’t get along well with their parents or with their classmates. They always feel stressed and easily get angry.

???? As a matter of fact, there’re many ways for us to deal with our mental problems. First of all, we can turn to our teachers for help, including our teacher of psychology. Second, communication is of vital importance. When we have a talk about our problems with our friends or classmates, we can feel greatly relieved. Last but not least, we need to develop a positive attitude towards our studies and our life. With the mental problems removed, we will keep in normal mental health and study happily.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求列出心理焦虑的各种现象，使用一般现在时的时态和第三人称。在提出应该采取对策的时候，又属于议论文的格式。

本文要点：1.列举学生心理焦虑的现象：部分学生担忧考试成绩；一些学生无法入睡；有些失去信心；有些学生与他人无法相处；2.解决的对策：向老师求助；对于别人交流；对待生活有积极的态度；

在写作的时候要灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】

本文的亮点是连接词的使用，如：as a matter of fact, first of all, Second和last but not least这些连词让文章成为一个整体。另外句中使用了一些高级词汇：get along well with…, develop attitudes towards…等等。

考点：考察社会现象类作文