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1．假如你是李华．你的好友Mike是美国一所汉语学院的一名中学生．最近给你来信说他学汉语有一定的困难，对自己失去了信心，产生了厌学情绪．请你给他回一封信开导他．
要点如下：
1．没有必要过于伤心；
2．要振作起来，尽量减少焦虑情绪；
3．和老师交流有助于你改进；
4．探索适合自己的有效学习方法．
注意：
1．词数：100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Mike，
I'm sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your Chinese study and have lost interest in schoolwork．________________________________________________________________________________

                                                    Yours
                                                     Li Hua．

分析 本题考查电子邮件写作，主要围绕开导自己的好友，故邮件写作时要注意语气，要具有鼓舞性．题目要点已经给出，注意不要漏掉要点．范文结构为两段式的分总结构，第一段为开导和劝慰，第二段收束全文．第一段第一句中I am sorry to hear that you didn't do well in 我很遗憾听说…．为全文奠定了一个感情基调，即带有一种同情劝慰性的语气；第二句中so there is no need to feel too bad．使用了there is no need to…没有必要…的固定句式；第四句Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music？使用了一个疑问句，使得文章十分富有感情；第五句If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most，they may give you some practical advice that helps you to improve．使用了if领导的条件状语从句；最后一句Probably it's time for you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you．使用了which领导的定语从句．在短语使用上，使用了do well 做得好，In my opinion 在我看来，At this moment 此时，cheer up 高兴起来，it's time to…是做…的时候等十分经典的常用短语．在词语使用上，本文词语拿捏恰到好处，使得文章十分富有感情，如第一句I am sorry to hear that you 中sorry一词的使用，以及最后一句I hope you can 中hope一词的使用，极富劝慰性，可以说文章的语气拿捏十分好，是文章最大亮点所在．总结：类似这类开导性劝慰性的邮件写作时要注意语气的拿捏，这会成为文章一大亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
In my view，Chinese is the most difficult for most foreign students，so there is no need to feel too bad．（高分句型一）
If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most，they may give you some practical advice that helps to improve．（高分句型二）
Probably it's time for you to explore a new learning method that is better and more suitable for you．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mike，
      I'm sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your Chinese study and have lost interest in schoolwork．In my view，Chinese is the most difficult for most foreign students，so there is no need to feel too bad．（高分句型一）At this moment，you should cheer up and find ways to relieve your anxiety．Why not go for an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music？If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most，they may give you some practical advice that helps to improve．（高分句型二）Probably it's time for you to explore a new learning method that is better and more suitable for you．（高分句型三）
      Anyhow，I do hope you cab rebuild your self-confidence soon．
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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