题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,在你校学习的美国交换生David和你成为了好朋友,并且在他的帮助下你的英语学习取得了很大的进步。在他结束学习回国之后, 请用英语给他写一封感谢信。内容应包括:
1. 表达思念;
2. 感谢帮助;
3. 希望保持联系。
注意事项:
1. 不得透露真实姓名和学校
2. 词数:100左右
3. 开头和结尾已写出,不计入词数
Dear David ,
How time flies! It’s been a total week since you left our school.
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Best wishes
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
How time flies! It’s been a total week since you left our school. Thank you so much for your help. How I wish you could stay here a little longer!
On writing this letter, precious memories rush into my mind. I still remember when you first came into our classroom smiling and showed us your wonderful Street Dance, which, as well as your native accent, attracted us all. What leaves me the deepest impression is the way you helped me memorize English words. You always repeated the words for many times before I could learn them all by heart. With your help, I have made much progress in my English, which finally ranks the top 10 in my class. Thank you so much again!
I really hope we can stay in touch forever!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】首先审题,这篇文章要求假如你是李华,在你校学习的美国交换生David和你成为了好朋友,并且在他的帮助下你的英语学习取得了很大的进步。在他结束学习回国之后, 请用英语给他写一封感谢信。任务中给出的提示信息包含如下内容:1. 表达思念;2. 感谢帮助;3. 希望保持联系。其次选用正确的人称和时态,考虑用一般现在时,第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子,使用正确的连词,连句成段。具体来说,写这篇文章时,要注意:提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: rush into冲进,by heart牢记。还使用了定语从句I still remember when you first came into our classroom smiling and showed us your wonderful Street Dance, which, as well as your native accent, attracted us all.和主语从句What leaves me the deepest impression is the way you helped me memorize English words.