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【题目】假定你是李华,是重庆一中高一学生,你接受了一项写作任务,要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。请根据以下信息,介绍一位传奇人物居里夫人。
Marie Curie
出生日期: | 1867年11月7日 |
出 生 地: | 波兰(Poland)一个富裕家庭 |
兴趣爱好: | 自幼对物理及阅读很有兴趣 |
教育经历: | 当时波兰不允许女子上大学,她去法国深造 |
性格特征: | 意志坚强,能专注研究 |
主要成就: | 发现镭(radium),是唯一获得诺贝尔物理和化学奖的女科学家 |
评价: | 为科学付出了很多,被认为是世界上最伟大的科学家 |
Marie Curie
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【答案】
Marie Curie
Born in a wealthy family in Poland ,Nov.7, 1867, Marie Curie, also known as Madame Curie, showed great interest in physics and reading at an early age. Having no chance of being admitted to a university in Poland as a woman at that time, she went to France for further studies. With a strong will, she managed to concentrate on her science research. Madame Curie achieved great success in discovering radium, which enabled her to be the only woman scientist to win the Nobel Prize in Physics as well as in Chemistry. Not only did she make great contributions to science but she was considered as the greatest woman scientist throughout the world.
【解析】
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